(AI) Dreamwalker
Hush!
Close your eyes, my little love
Feel the soothing breeze
And whistles of the night
The gentle song
A lullaby of the ancient
Mist flowing
See up ahead
Figure the stranger
Waving at you
The eyes
Into them see
A thousand worlds
Waiting for you
No more we are memories
No more we are dreams
You and I standing
In the middle of the dance
The dancing fog
Hush!
Hush my little love…
Hush!
Hush my sweet endeavour…
Hush!
Hush…
And let this figure of mine
Waver from your mind
I am the dreamwalker
My footprints
I left in your dreams
Etched in your mind
Drawing you ecstasy
Drawing you hope
Drawing you delusion
Drawing you sorrow
Drawing you despair
I am the dreamwalker
When you see butterflies flutter
I am near
Oh my dear dreamwalker, take me in your arms. Fly me into the everlasting cloudy ocean. Take me away, take me away, far away. Touch me with your dreamy hands and whisper me a forgotten tongue. Take me away, take me away, far away. Tell me tales. Sing me songs. Rhyme me poetries. Bring me adventuring in the land of dreams.
I am the dreamwalker
When you see butterflies flutter
I am near
May 8, 2008 at 1:48 am
my fave here’ll have to be stanzas 1,4,6 and 7.
The imagery is good and so is the rhythm…
Thank you, my dear friend :]
May 8, 2008 at 1:52 am
just one more thing…Have you heard of neopoet.com..
that’s one site you should join.it has lots and lots of poets who’ll criticize and comment on your poems(some of them like some guy called ‘the professor’ are really good)
i joined it this year and they have played a vital role in improving my poetry…my user name there’s ’slybard’…drop me a line when and if,you join and i’ll show you around the site…
Ok, I’ll stop by sometime soon. Am not sure if I’d join but I’ll check it out. Thank you.
May 8, 2008 at 11:35 am
Very nice,
Perhaps the dreamwalker is trying to take us away from our dreams and what seems a dream is actually more real.
Ah, that my friend, only the dreamwalker knows :]